〜との深いつながりを持つ／have
a close relationship with 〜
ペット／pet(s)
家族の一員として扱う／treat 〜as members of one's family
In
my opinion, it is perfectly acceptable for people to
love their pets. However, there are many people who
are too close to them. Some people take their pets
everywhere they go. They also feed them different kinds
of food instead of giving them pet food. Others talk
to their pets as if they were people. While these people
may think that their relationship with their pets is
a natural one, I find it unhealthy. Pets are not people.
These pet owners should treat their pets just as animals.
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